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Review Detail of BAJJ in Bewitching Eyes

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Yes, there are minor errors but hey, it was a fun read. I quite enjoyed it actually. But as a reader what I can say is that I cant feel what the MC feels. I mean he felt like a stranger that just being gossip to me. Just that. I hope this will help and I'll keep updated! Adding it to my library. Let's keep on improvingšŸ‘šŸ» nice idea btw. Every fan of this kind of genre would really enjoy it.

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Bewitching Eyes

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I have heard this advice before....but i am really confused...How should i improve it? Can you give me an example? A wrong one and a correct one.....I will be grateful

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Sure. I'll leave it on the comment section. Hehe though I am no any better šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

opolo:I have heard this advice before....but i am really confused...How should i improve it? Can you give me an example? A wrong one and a correct one.....I will be grateful