Review Detail of kopolok in Bewitching Eyes

Item: Bewitching Eyes
Rating: 5

Review detail

kopolokLv35yrkopolok

Giving five stars because i like harem and system genre in novel. But it seems like you will suffer a lot in converting this romance novel in a harem novel. You said you are experimenting with the story? i will be glad to help. I wish though that he can be different form the cliche MC in novels. The writing needs improvement though

Bewitching Eyes

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opoloAuthoropolo

Hm to be true harem is not my priority right now, i want to get experience in writing story in a well organized way. I want to learn how to write good fight scenes and good introductions. So, i would manly focus on the story development, fight scenes, breakthroughs, and character introductions.

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