Review Detail of SN7 in Inequivalent Exchange

Iskai is a well-established genre, anyone who likes it will be able to understand what is happening from the beginning. However, lack of past tense during the narration is really off-putting. The grammar is not the worst by Qidian standards, I would say it's in the middle of the pack. The punctuation, however, is pretty jarring. Everyone started somewhere, and with practice, these problems can be easily taken care of. I would recommend the author to read some actual English novels, taking notes about the formatting and words used. And most importantly, write a lot! Good luck with the novel!