Review Detail of BoredPanda in Inequivalent Exchange

Good start, mystery kicks in, the way situations is described is good. Sentences are smooth... The only flaws are missing commas after a dialouge and some question marks and dots. Story is good, a bit unique concept. I think the current chapter is insufficient to outline the story, but it is only on Chapter 9....Overall, the story is good, how it progress will be how you want it, the flaws are only tbose that I stated.