Review Detail of RollingPanda in The Butterfly of Chaos
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Let me start by saying I love the writing and aspects of the plot. However, the whole plot feels like the a strange mix-mash of two different stories. Im not sure who the MC is on one hand there is li xiang the chaos butterfly with a tragic past and a charcter i’m really intrested about. She looks like she has a layered backround and a cool set powers. On the otherhand there is her brother? I think. Who is just bland and arrogant and just kind of annoying. It feels like you as an author are trying to link these to stories together but its not working please focus on one charcted it would be best if that character was the chaos butterfly in your title. Apart from that I really hope you expand on her past and I loved the whole cultivation system much more original than other webnovels. Keep it up the story has lots of potential. For best results maybe rewrite aspects if the story focusing on li xiang starting with her intial rebirth? In the immortal world and slow down the pacing of her getting that power. 👍
The Butterfly of Chaos
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Hello! This is an ambitious project of mine - to attempt to write from three different characters' point-of-view for a general overarching story. It may be confusing at first of who is the "MC" of the plot, of which I will attempt to address pretty soon (or later). That being said, this is merely just the exposition stage for the novel, so several parts may not match or seem off tangent for now. Thanks for reading, hope you find it more better later on! ;)