Review Detail of Unfortunate_Bandit in Tales of Magic Swordsman

This is going to be an honest review from someone who has read a fair amount of books and novels. To begin with you have a very cliche MC. Typical video game plot and leveling system which isn't necessarily a bad thing. The MC uses about 0% of his brain constantly which leads to lots of plot holes and making the readers angry with his stupid and illogical decisions. The book starts off with ok grammar if you can overlook the misuse of present and past tense as well as constant spelling errors but as it continues the grammar only gets worse. It gets so bad that almost every other sentence looks like a five year old wrote it and it honestly gives me a headache. The plot isn't that bad, its the grammar that needs to be fixed. Please hire someone to fix it.