Review Detail of Korriberg in Tales of Magic Swordsman

I tried, I really did. I don't think the story per se is that bad. It's mostly mediocre and cliche heavy. What made my rating fall under 3 stars is mostly the writing quality. The text is riddled with spelling errors and the grammar is all over the place. An editor or at least a proofreader could easily improve the quality by 1 star. The other point that I didn't like about this story would be the story development. MC makes a lot of really groundless and stupid decisions. Especially in the beginning, I get that the author tried to create a desperate/bad situation for his character but since most of the problems MC has come from his own stupidity I can't and won't feel sorry for him at all. All in all I would say, the writing quality (spelling, grammar) needs a lot of work and the story development is at most so so (readable if you have nothing better to read). The rest is average. Would only recommend if you have a lot of time to kill, aren't bothered by bad spelling/grammar and don't expect anything special. Hope I could help :)