I like the story. Sure the grammar needs to be touched up but it is still readable. What gets me is the fact that the mc is so moronic!😔💨 For a so called “#1” player the mc gets enraged by a small slight and that is ok he can get revenge when he gets stronger. The next day he immediately shows hostility and alerts the enemy even when he is far weaker in a lot of aspects. It’s just stupid. Why did I write this again? I don’t want to delete after I put so much time into this. 🤷♂️
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