While needing a bit of editing, this is a really good story. The MC falls to a schemer (not so sure he has the culprits right) and has to start all over. Previously, he was the No. 1 player in the massively popular MMORPG, completely maxed and a bit bored and waiting for the new upgrade. Now, due to sponsorship penalties, he has to earn some serious cash while hiding his new player identity (there are petty people out there...). I think it has great potential and can't wait to see what happens next!
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LIKENice except you forgot to mention his dementia and the fact he doesnt have a brain. You have 8 year of history, pretty sure he should have the least bit of brain cells to not sign that contact in the first place. Or is he one of those person that instead of getting smarter become more dumb as he "matured". Very laudable, the fact you rate this novel as a"rally good story". When I see this novel as a book full of holes and filed with the author idiocy.
I bet you are fun at parties ! He said it was his first book but apparently you dont think people can do better after the first book !
ReaderLove:Nice except you forgot to mention his dementia and the fact he doesnt have a brain. You have 8 year of history, pretty sure he should have the least bit of brain cells to not sign that contact in the first place. Or is he one of those person that instead of getting smarter become more dumb as he "matured". Very laudable, the fact you rate this novel as a"rally good story". When I see this novel as a book full of holes and filed with the author idiocy.
Justify the 4.5 star review. Deceiving readers with false rating when its clearly a 3 or bellow 3 novel, is wrong and only a stupid dog will bark in protesting against any true review out there. Now think about yourself first. You sure are fun at party, everyone can make fun of your stupidity and low level intelligence.
My_Nigga:I bet you are fun at parties ! He said it was his first book but apparently you dont think people can do better after the first book !
Justify the 4.5 star review. Deceiving readers with false rating when its clearly a 3 or bellow 3 novel, is wrong and only a stupid dog will bark in protesting against any true review out there. Now think about yourself first. You sure are fun at party, everyone can make fun of your stupidity and low level intelligence.
My_Nigga:I bet you are fun at parties ! He said it was his first book but apparently you dont think people can do better after the first book !