It had a lot of potential, be sure to use that, I wasn't able to get too deep into it because I'm on a tight schedule wo please forgive my lack of info, but you did a good job.
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LIKECritical_Kind:Could you do a review for my book. It's a new one called Draga of the Vanguard, and I'd like some criticism