So far there hasn't been many chapters uploaded and not much has happened but what I can say is that the story has started a bit slow, which isn't a bad thing since I'm sure that it'll get better as you keep uploading chapters. It's really good that you wrote where your story is headed in your description since I know what I'm looking forward to. The story itself has a bit of humor here and there which is always welcomes and it doesn't feel out of place. So far I'm not fully sure about how I feel about Chase as a person but I look forward to his development. I think one thing that bothers me is that your writing style is rigid but it makes sense that it would be like that since you're not a native English speaker but if possible become more relaxed with your style. There are a couple of mistakes but the majority of the novels I've read had some mistakes.
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