Review Detail of BAJJ in Monsters Within: Legendary Dragon's Heart

Writing Quality: i’ll give 4 stars. Aside from some grammatical errors and mispelled words, Author did a good job as I could imagine what happened which is good. Stability updates: Since this story was published a few days ago I couldn’t really tell if it’ll have a consistent updates but I hope author wont drop this story midway. So Im giving it 4.5 star because so far I like it. Story Development: Im giving it 5 star because I like it. Though the concept is common I hope author would give a lot of twist and turns in this story to make it more interesting and different from other cultivation novels. Character Design: since there wasnt many characters yet, I’ll focus on the protagonist. I like Chase as I thought he is some kind of proud kid that never had the slightest grievances in his young heart but the stealing part of the essence stone caught me off guard. Though I was wondering how did he do that since those stones were so rare. World Background: so far I like it. Overall, the story was good. Though the story isnt that new I know author had his own spices to make it unique from others. Tho some words are redundant but theres always room for improvement. I always prefer quality over quantity. I know it was hard to detect one owns error so I hope this help in some ways. Keep up the good work! 👍🏻