Review Detail of LuoYeYouLing in Bloodline Mage

The length of the story is good and so is the story development. I understand that it might be hard to explain things to the readers if you solely rely on first person view. However, the sudden changed in POV was a little confusing. I thought I have accidentally opened a different tab. Maybe put in a notification whenever you changed POV? I know there is the line thingy, but it is not very clear that it was meant to be a change of POV. Cheers, Luo Ye