I just started reading this so I haven't read much yet.. but what I can say was that for a first-time writer, you sure are awesome! I love the way you describe things, it's smooth for me and so vivid~ I also like the characters, the ML is not your typical cold CEO. He's quite a cutie specially with how he dote on the MC. There are just some tiny mistakes I can spot here and there (actually it's not really mistake per se, I just think that there are some phrase that if edited, will make the story flow better I guess?) . But even without these things.. the overall quality of the story is still quite good! Keep up the good work author-nim!! Lovelove~ ❤
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