Review Detail of Scarlettbunny in My Way To You
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Hello! This is my second novel, my first being Hinder-Rella. I am going with a darker tone to this one. More of an adventure/romance/comedy/not meant for pure minds that will easily be corrupted by my words and can never look at the world same way kinda feel. Any who I am warning you know, there is only one chapter and it jumped right into a bad place the happy go lucky then bad again. So be warned this is almost nothing like Hinder-Rella unless you read the murder scene or toture scene or parental abuse scene. Cause it's kinda like that but maybe worse haven't decided but here you go. My way to you. Happy reading!
My Way To You
Scarlettbunny
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Hi, the story is interesting, promising though, don't know why it got less views but Ms. Author I hope you could edit the first few chapters and the synopsis, few grammar mistakes are there, yes I'm not that much of a saint in English literature, but still the flow not matches some times. I could see the determination in your work which made you write so many chapters, hope you could give a good finishing to this and keep going, never become disappointed in work, as this is the platform for us author's to show out our skills and wild imaginations.
balubalubalu666:Hi, the story is interesting, promising though, don't know why it got less views but Ms. Author I hope you could edit the first few chapters and the synopsis, few grammar mistakes are there, yes I'm not that much of a saint in English literature, but still the flow not matches some times. I could see the determination in your work which made you write so many chapters, hope you could give a good finishing to this and keep going, never become disappointed in work, as this is the platform for us author's to show out our skills and wild imaginations.
A small suggestion, plz don't mind if I was offensive in any way. Scarlet your writing style makes you write more of a paragraphic story with 10+ lines, try to write less, like about three-five lines per para before starting a new one, it makes reading easier and faster for readers. Though you have a great story, many readers may give up soon if they find their reading pace turn slow. And one more thing, your grammar seems to improve a little, comparing to the initial chapters, do never give up!! 😊
Sorry for inconvenience it's, "so never give up!! "At the last line. I would remove this message by the time you reply me, so as to not let readers take my message a negative one. 😄
balubalubalu666:A small suggestion, plz don't mind if I was offensive in any way. Scarlet your writing style makes you write more of a paragraphic story with 10+ lines, try to write less, like about three-five lines per para before starting a new one, it makes reading easier and faster for readers. Though you have a great story, many readers may give up soon if they find their reading pace turn slow. And one more thing, your grammar seems to improve a little, comparing to the initial chapters, do never give up!! 😊
None. At all. I'm not sure where you are at the story yet but later on the chapters are shorter and easier to read. I did change the synopsis a bit 😄 but I still have to review everything else. Weekends I tend to spend with the family. 😜
balubalubalu666:A small suggestion, plz don't mind if I was offensive in any way. Scarlet your writing style makes you write more of a paragraphic story with 10+ lines, try to write less, like about three-five lines per para before starting a new one, it makes reading easier and faster for readers. Though you have a great story, many readers may give up soon if they find their reading pace turn slow. And one more thing, your grammar seems to improve a little, comparing to the initial chapters, do never give up!! 😊
Sure. It's still undecided. I know for sure that there will be another arc where she graduates from the Academy and is actually fighting along with the rebellion. I just took a unforseen break due to getting a new job. So most likely 500+
balubalubalu666:Hi can I know how long your story would go, like 300+ or 400+ or 500+ chapters