Review Detail of Sdrawkcab in Rise of the Hunters

This is my first completed story, that I actually finished. The story-line is rough because I only had a rough idea of where I wanted to go with it. I think I could do better with the secondary characters and the background characters, but overall, I am very happy with this story. I may try to rewrite it sometime in the future, now that I know where I want it to go, but for now, I will leave it here for others to read and decide what they think. Personally, I had several chapters in this story that I greatly enjoyed, and several characters that I think I would have enjoyed fleshing out more. As far as I know, I didn't leave any unanswered questions, so if you find any, please let me know. The last chapter ends on a happy note, with Xun looking forward to the future. There is no harem, and most everyone ends with a significant other to spend their days with.