In a website predominantly dominated by super powered heroes, this is a welcome respite. It's a story that tells of how an orphaned 'ordinary' human fights for survival. Characters are Fleshed out, and the world building is detailed. It's not a fast pace action novel, but one that keeps you connected with it's regular tinge of mysterious excitement. Plus there are vampires.
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LIKEIndeed, but you're already doing well. You have uncanny ability to weave plots into plots, putting together a lot of different and disjointed info to make on beautiful tapestry of a story.
Sdrawkcab:Thanks for the review! I've tried to work on the action, but this is my first story so there's lots of room for growth.
Hey Author, finished book one of the Evolutionary Trilogy a bit ago, you also replied to some of my comments, my username was Aiden Sullivan before, and I was wondering if you could use (what I would say is a few drafts, they are on my profile, to do with systems...) to write a new story. You'd get all the credit, I'd just like to see Sacaroth the Enchanted get started. Maybe as a follow-up for Abuse of Magic? Get back to me if you feel okay about it, I still have some ideas, mainly about programing the runes to make full on enchantments
Sdrawkcab:Thanks for the review! I've tried to work on the action, but this is my first story so there's lots of room for growth.
SacarothIsWriting:Hey Author, finished book one of the Evolutionary Trilogy a bit ago, you also replied to some of my comments, my username was Aiden Sullivan before, and I was wondering if you could use (what I would say is a few drafts, they are on my profile, to do with systems...) to write a new story. You'd get all the credit, I'd just like to see Sacaroth the Enchanted get started. Maybe as a follow-up for Abuse of Magic? Get back to me if you feel okay about it, I still have some ideas, mainly about programing the runes to make full on enchantments
SacarothIsWriting:Hey Author, finished book one of the Evolutionary Trilogy a bit ago, you also replied to some of my comments, my username was Aiden Sullivan before, and I was wondering if you could use (what I would say is a few drafts, they are on my profile, to do with systems...) to write a new story. You'd get all the credit, I'd just like to see Sacaroth the Enchanted get started. Maybe as a follow-up for Abuse of Magic? Get back to me if you feel okay about it, I still have some ideas, mainly about programing the runes to make full on enchantments
SacarothIsWriting:Hey Author, finished book one of the Evolutionary Trilogy a bit ago, you also replied to some of my comments, my username was Aiden Sullivan before, and I was wondering if you could use (what I would say is a few drafts, they are on my profile, to do with systems...) to write a new story. You'd get all the credit, I'd just like to see Sacaroth the Enchanted get started. Maybe as a follow-up for Abuse of Magic? Get back to me if you feel okay about it, I still have some ideas, mainly about programing the runes to make full on enchantments