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Review Detail of Anone in Rise of the Hunters

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Anone
AnoneLv135yrAnone

In a website predominantly dominated by super powered heroes, this is a welcome respite. It's a story that tells of how an orphaned 'ordinary' human fights for survival. Characters are Fleshed out, and the world building is detailed. It's not a fast pace action novel, but one that keeps you connected with it's regular tinge of mysterious excitement. Plus there are vampires.

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Rise of the Hunters

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Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

Thanks for the review! I've tried to work on the action, but this is my first story so there's lots of room for growth.

Anone
AnoneLv13Anone

Indeed, but you're already doing well. You have uncanny ability to weave plots into plots, putting together a lot of different and disjointed info to make on beautiful tapestry of a story.

Sdrawkcab:Thanks for the review! I've tried to work on the action, but this is my first story so there's lots of room for growth.
Teja666
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I see

Teja666
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I see

SacarothIsWriting
SacarothIsWritingLv3SacarothIsWriting

Hey Author, finished book one of the Evolutionary Trilogy a bit ago, you also replied to some of my comments, my username was Aiden Sullivan before, and I was wondering if you could use (what I would say is a few drafts, they are on my profile, to do with systems...) to write a new story. You'd get all the credit, I'd just like to see Sacaroth the Enchanted get started. Maybe as a follow-up for Abuse of Magic? Get back to me if you feel okay about it, I still have some ideas, mainly about programing the runes to make full on enchantments

Sdrawkcab:Thanks for the review! I've tried to work on the action, but this is my first story so there's lots of room for growth.
SacarothIsWriting
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I made a grammer error, good reason to show why I don't write myself

SacarothIsWriting:Hey Author, finished book one of the Evolutionary Trilogy a bit ago, you also replied to some of my comments, my username was Aiden Sullivan before, and I was wondering if you could use (what I would say is a few drafts, they are on my profile, to do with systems...) to write a new story. You'd get all the credit, I'd just like to see Sacaroth the Enchanted get started. Maybe as a follow-up for Abuse of Magic? Get back to me if you feel okay about it, I still have some ideas, mainly about programing the runes to make full on enchantments
Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

Is there a story name I can look it up under? I can't seem to find a way to search for authors.

SacarothIsWriting:Hey Author, finished book one of the Evolutionary Trilogy a bit ago, you also replied to some of my comments, my username was Aiden Sullivan before, and I was wondering if you could use (what I would say is a few drafts, they are on my profile, to do with systems...) to write a new story. You'd get all the credit, I'd just like to see Sacaroth the Enchanted get started. Maybe as a follow-up for Abuse of Magic? Get back to me if you feel okay about it, I still have some ideas, mainly about programing the runes to make full on enchantments
Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

Nevermind, I think I found them. I'll check them out but I can't promise anything lol. Thanks!

SacarothIsWriting:Hey Author, finished book one of the Evolutionary Trilogy a bit ago, you also replied to some of my comments, my username was Aiden Sullivan before, and I was wondering if you could use (what I would say is a few drafts, they are on my profile, to do with systems...) to write a new story. You'd get all the credit, I'd just like to see Sacaroth the Enchanted get started. Maybe as a follow-up for Abuse of Magic? Get back to me if you feel okay about it, I still have some ideas, mainly about programing the runes to make full on enchantments