Review Detail of Brandongould94 in The Torn Throne
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This is brandon Gould the writter of the Tylingariea Epic i am responding to a review swap that i asked to do on the form. here is my review Of what is out so far i am enjoying the story. the MC seems intresting and there is room for his chartor to become expanded on. as i was reading i was wondering what is the name of this world or land that the book takes place in, is there a war going on between a diffrent place. Fleshing out the world would be a good idea and crafting a sort of lore or inteal myhtos to add to the worlds history could be interesting. but i think the plot is moving at a good pace and hope to see more of the book
The Torn Throne
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Some information is purposely withheld in the beginning of the story, and will be told later at a natural pace. I didn't want to go for an information dump, i want the reader to learn about the world as the story develops. The synopsis, however, provides some answers to the questions you've asked, such as the world's name (it at least the name is the continent it takes place on I assure you that these questions, and more will be answered as the story progresses. Though, you'll have more questions along with those answers as well! ;)