this novel has a potential to become extremely good if it will not lose the inital ideas xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Lord_of_sleep
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LIKEi want to add something i hope it will be useful to you: MC can have characteric changes even sometimes doing something stupid but "..never go full ret**d.." Tropic T***der R. Dow**y Jr. anti MC faction included :)
Lord_of_sleep:Thanks for taking your time to review agmmagm it is appreciated. As the world expands in the novel I'll do my best to keep true to all the factors you like ☺
Lol yh true I'll definately take that into consideration as Sir Mouse develops fully. He does like to keep his image afterall
agmmagm:i want to add something i hope it will be useful to you: MC can have characteric changes even sometimes doing something stupid but "..never go full ret**d.." Tropic T***der R. Dow**y Jr. anti MC faction included :)