Review Detail of WorstNameEver in Elemental Archon (Hiatus/Rewrite)

Hey guys, shameless review by the author. Although I am giving my honest opinions in each section, this is mainly just to tell people what this book is about and such. So first up; this book is updated simply whenever I have finished a chapter. This means that any mistakes you find within a chapter can be easily fixed and it also gives me less stress in having to pump chapters out to fulfil an update schedule. That isn't the type of writer I am, I write based on moods and when I get into the zone which makes it hard to... forcefully write chapters. The main character is op but not at the same time. Although he will be strong (once the book really gets started), he has downsides as a result of cultivation technique that makes him less like Chu Feng and Huang Xiaolong (who are well known for their stupid levels of poor intellect and ridiculous strength). The book is quite a slow burn early on, with plans to only really pick up the pace at the roughly 10 chapter mark. Cultivation and its names are complicated, to be honest, but I have made glossaries to fix this. In my opinion, the general knowledge of cultivation should make it complicated purely on principle, much like science is complicated despite being the base of our universe. Character names are done using some websites because I have no knowledge of any Chinese language (the fact I don't know the official name of their language shows my lack of knowledge), but I have tried to make the names make sense using other books that have such names and using them as reference for the conventions of the language when translated. Hope you enjoy the book and please leave a review or comment on chapters you like. Any criticism would be preferably constructive and reasonable cos I do have a temper when haters come calling. Then again... When you have haters, you know you are popular heh heh heh