Review Detail of Roosterbee in Elemental Archon (Hiatus/Rewrite)

I don’t have anything relevant to say about the plot, since it’s still the beginning of the story. The novel is rather slow paced, which should probably be attributed to the necessary explanations at the start. I hope for more dialogues and conversations later, but that may be my personal preference . The quality of the authors english and writing is quite rare for webnovel, especially for the original-section. In my opinion you should go on like you did till now and publish finished chapters instead of rushed ones other authors do for potentially more spirit stones or power stones. (quality>quantity/speed) Your ranking will naturally become better once more chapters are out. That said I think in an overall comparison with other original stories you deserve 5 stars. Keep it up :)