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DarkTempest
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Hey this is really well written! I love Greek mythology and cultivation is a pretty cool concept. Though I love the two alone I don't know how they would work together. It's cool how you did just that but I think it needs a bit more time flesh out the details because as of now it's a little confusing. Love Leo so far! Great character, but other than that Hiro is a little bit confusing. I think you need to just take a bit more time develop where the story's headed in general but it's great!

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Survival to Godhood

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Its all mythology actually. I want to use all gods as the beings who have ascended. I just have mostly touched upon the Greek ones. Yeah I need work on the characters a lot. Thanks for the review.