Review Detail of KimSasha in Little thief? NOT anymore~~

Writing quality: It has some grammatical errors but nothing major and I didn’t need to read a sentence twice. Good job. Update: So far so good. I’m waiting to see how it’ll be later but if you follow your planning, it’s good. Story: So far it’s satisfying. The flow is great and the story can grab readers. It would better if chapters were longer but we can’t have all we want. Character: They are well described and have a personality each. Lou is endearing. I remain curious about how Xia Huo catches wind of her to the point of wanting her by his side because it's not every day that someone will ask his guards to pick someone up from the street. World: It's well described and we can imagine it. You didn't throw too much information at the same time, which is a good point. Seriously not bad for a first novel.