Review Detail of LuoYeYouLing in The King's Fiery Temptress

The writing quality is good and the stability of upates are OK. You did mentioned that you would be posting 5-7 chapters a week. I'm reading yours using a laptop so it was fine but you might want to consider making it shorter for those who read using phones. Of course, this is completely up to your own comfort. :D Character design is good so far, but while Hera appeared to be opinionated, her trust in her 'father' was so weak that she was left confused with Therion's words? I hope that was because of her "memory loss" . I would prefer to see a naughtier princess who would give him more trouble and not fall for his good looks so early in the story. Then again, that's me. It was rather sad what happened to Shila. She seems like a good woman. Love can be devastating! Looking forward to the next chapters. :)