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Hanma_Jack
Hanma_JackLv45yrHanma_Jack

First one was way better man, I mean way better. I liked alien MC more than human MC, every novel is with the same human moralfag MC, it's just boring dude, nothing new here, same principles, same philosophy, same everything. This completely feels like watching another Japanese anime series with beta male lead getting cucked by strong characters whole series. "Character development" my ass, lol. Idk how can someone go from the masterpiece like previous work to this ****. When I heard you wanted to do a rewrite I thought it would be completely erasing MC unnecessary human emotions and connections and going full alien, instead, you did this. Smh. You must've listened to other retarded beta readers with: 'Muh too OP', 'Muh too evil'' MC. If they're your target audience then go for it, good luck.

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KermitGunner
KermitGunnerLv4KermitGunner

Is anyone with a different opinion than you a 'beta retard'? Just saying...

ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5ArashiTenebris

if you guy are look for a novel of a true neutral/evil then you can check this novel on royalroadl, name "The Voyager: Remastered", that how you write an emotionless mc, without going full "evil" in an unnecessary, she is more of a clever/efficient one so she do know how to pretend there