Review Detail of Lukis_Aurelius in Mitochondria of the Human World

5! 5! 5! 5! 4! Absolutely awesome! You did a fabulous job making the MC feel true to life! From the beginning I loved the premise of a reverse-isekai story, it was so refreshing. You have a great knack for pacing, you were very good at explaining what was needed, just enough to evoke imagery but not so much it was exhausting, plus your chapters are consistent and consistently long. Your grasp of the english language is great! If there was anything at all I would say it would be to take a little bit of time to build the setting and world around the MC. However i expect that stuff would happen naturally as the story progresses. Ive added your story to my library, and if I wasnt working on my own novel I would definitely vote for you. I can honestly say this is one of the best originals I have seen in terms of skill of writing.