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2018-11-13 04:17

The story is gud but plz improve the English a little bit of grammer that's all, cause there r many mistakes . But the story is gud waiting for next chapter

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Thx for like my story but yeah I still inprove my english 😊

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Gud put u r best forward I'll be cheering

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