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5 stars for update 1 star for everything else. Seriously, I have no idea why this book is ranked highly. It is LITERAL garbage, I know that I have no idea how the story progresses since I've only read up till around chapter 5. But I can already tell that this book is utter garbage and I will not waste anymore time reading a supposedly (if any) improvement on the authors part. Here are the reasons why: while the mc was still in the womb, he was given a system and around 100+ billion points to spend on something. And like any 'genius' mc he spent 200+ points in order to buy a bloodline which from my understanding can fused different bloodline together. Even if this was already quite absurd I could still endure the story, but the next part just sent me to a fit of super saiyan rage. FOR ONLY 1 BILLION points he had not only save kushina and minato from dying but also grant most of the side characters from the leaf village chakra levels that are at the same level as a 1 tailed jinchuriki. Ohh and did I mention that he was still in his mother's WOMB when he wished for it. Meaning that he still hasn't recieved the trust or loyalty of those he gave balance breaking powers to. And the best part? The mc wasnt told what family he was gonna be born in. So he if he were to be born on a nation that's enemies with konoha, then we could safely assume that he would be be royally focked. Seriously if this is what supposedly 'genius' MC grand plan, then I'm kinda looking forward to read about what the 'Idiotic' people would do.
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Yeah the story actually made me rage lol. But if you wanna have an idea of the story then go read chapter 4 and 5 man.
Denzel_theking:I was just about to give this a try but after your review I’m afraid for my brain cells
Honestly I will still give the story a try. But I can totally empathize with you about this. Having a hero complex is rather exhausting. The very idea of having a hero is flawed. Which is why archer (Emiya shirou - definitely misspelt that name) is so silly trying to be a spirit of being a hero. The idea of saying "this person should live", and "that person should die" is what a tyrant would say. Heroes say the same. Judge jury and executioner. Minato is a mass murderer. (During war) any anime fan should recognize that. Why does everyone want him to live? Kushina on the other hand, is a political pawn and prisoner in Konoha. I can understand trying to save her. Anyways. Gonna try and read this novel. Give it a chance. If it doesn't agree with me I'll drop it. I do appreciate having a negative review available though since while you focused on only one aspect, it gives a good perspective on that part of the story.
No worries man, I'm not trying to make push people away from reading this book. I'm more so giving them a heads up on what to expect, cuz the overly hype 5 star reviews below are honestly not helpful at all. And yeah, I havent watched the fate series yet, so I cant really relate with you on that haha, sorry.
Destrucfor:Honestly I will still give the story a try. But I can totally empathize with you about this. Having a hero complex is rather exhausting. The very idea of having a hero is flawed. Which is why archer (Emiya shirou - definitely misspelt that name) is so silly trying to be a spirit of being a hero. The idea of saying "this person should live", and "that person should die" is what a tyrant would say. Heroes say the same. Judge jury and executioner. Minato is a mass murderer. (During war) any anime fan should recognize that. Why does everyone want him to live? Kushina on the other hand, is a political pawn and prisoner in Konoha. I can understand trying to save her. Anyways. Gonna try and read this novel. Give it a chance. If it doesn't agree with me I'll drop it. I do appreciate having a negative review available though since while you focused on only one aspect, it gives a good perspective on that part of the story.
Came to the same conclusion really early on in this novel. Weird plot holes such as him wishing that you can't take someones doujutsu if you dont have permission. This complicates things if a character stole some eyes before MC wished for this rule. Based on the timeline when MC is born, Ao from kiri has the byakugan eye. It wouldn't make any sense for the dude to take them as it doesn't work. And honestly the worst part for me is when he spent so many fking points on buffing others instead of himself. Hell he didn't even buff his fkin parents. Guess what? First couple chapters, MC parents and himself almost died running from enemy shinobi just to be saved by plot armor. Tsk tsk disappointment.
Lmao ohhh wow, I really did not see that parents in danger thing coming, how forced was it? But yes the plot is quite odd on this one. Also I'm a bit pissed off about him spending more than 1900 billion points on pretty much fack all, but for only about 3 billion points he was capable of changing people's fate(minato,kushina and shushin not dying) and even granting people absurd powers (shikamaru now has the chakra level of the 3 tails). And remember this was all accomplished by a messily 3 billion points! And we must also remember that this guy was supposedly a "child genius", which proceeds to infuriate me even more lol. I shall stop replying here now, I dont like the feeling of having my logic raped everytime I come on this trend.
Petrifly:Came to the same conclusion really early on in this novel. Weird plot holes such as him wishing that you can't take someones doujutsu if you dont have permission. This complicates things if a character stole some eyes before MC wished for this rule. Based on the timeline when MC is born, Ao from kiri has the byakugan eye. It wouldn't make any sense for the dude to take them as it doesn't work. And honestly the worst part for me is when he spent so many fking points on buffing others instead of himself. Hell he didn't even buff his fkin parents. Guess what? First couple chapters, MC parents and himself almost died running from enemy shinobi just to be saved by plot armor. Tsk tsk disappointment.
HungryForChapters:Lmao ohhh wow, I really did not see that parents in danger thing coming, how forced was it? But yes the plot is quite odd on this one. Also I'm a bit pissed off about him spending more than 1900 billion points on pretty much fack all, but for only about 3 billion points he was capable of changing people's fate(minato,kushina and shushin not dying) and even granting people absurd powers (shikamaru now has the chakra level of the 3 tails). And remember this was all accomplished by a messily 3 billion points! And we must also remember that this guy was supposedly a "child genius", which proceeds to infuriate me even more lol. I shall stop replying here now, I dont like the feeling of having my logic raped everytime I come on this trend.
Petrifly:Came to the same conclusion really early on in this novel. Weird plot holes such as him wishing that you can't take someones doujutsu if you dont have permission. This complicates things if a character stole some eyes before MC wished for this rule. Based on the timeline when MC is born, Ao from kiri has the byakugan eye. It wouldn't make any sense for the dude to take them as it doesn't work. And honestly the worst part for me is when he spent so many fking points on buffing others instead of himself. Hell he didn't even buff his fkin parents. Guess what? First couple chapters, MC parents and himself almost died running from enemy shinobi just to be saved by plot armor. Tsk tsk disappointment.
Does that even matter? MC lives in konoha, hes gonna meet the characters before they even meet an enemy.
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I don't think you understand why we rated it so low. In the first 7 chapters, MC wasted BILLIONS of points on people not related to himself. Hurr durr imma just buff all these characters i know... my parents? Nah fk them. What kind of person buffs people they haven't met instead of themselves or their immediate family. The MC parents risked their lives to get his ass to konoha and you criticize us for not reading more? Maybe i will need another billion points to prevent me from getting brain cancer.
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Destrucfor:Honestly I will still give the story a try. But I can totally empathize with you about this. Having a hero complex is rather exhausting. The very idea of having a hero is flawed. Which is why archer (Emiya shirou - definitely misspelt that name) is so silly trying to be a spirit of being a hero. The idea of saying "this person should live", and "that person should die" is what a tyrant would say. Heroes say the same. Judge jury and executioner. Minato is a mass murderer. (During war) any anime fan should recognize that. Why does everyone want him to live? Kushina on the other hand, is a political pawn and prisoner in Konoha. I can understand trying to save her. Anyways. Gonna try and read this novel. Give it a chance. If it doesn't agree with me I'll drop it. I do appreciate having a negative review available though since while you focused on only one aspect, it gives a good perspective on that part of the story.
