I liked the way how the story started. The character and world design are quite intriguing. the flow of the story is quite good too. the author's style of writing could use some improvements though. but apart from that, I'm really hooked on to this story. I can't wait for the next chapters. Thank you so much for working hard!
Panqiuyan
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