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Mel_Aniv
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You have a great story and the first chapters were nice. The only problem I have found was other dialogues were not distinguishable who said it. Please put the name and action of the ones who said it. Peace be with you, I don't want to be harsh. Just wanted to improve your novel that is.... Please do the same for my novel called Waking Up In Undead World. I will wait!

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Thorns of the Forgotten Rose

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