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The first thing that scream at me was the amount of dialogue on the starting chapters. I want to suggest the author to at least describe the setting. Yes, just from reading the dialogue, one could tell that it's set in the modern world, but I want some descriptions. If they are rich businessmen, I want a bit of description regarding their status maybe what kind of circle of people they hang around with, living situation, or how big their business is. Other than that everything is good, one thing that I love is the attitude of the main character, Lin Ai. It's a hate and love kind of attitude that I intrigue with. At the begin, lol, I want to slap her so bad. She the kind of children that I would be afraid to raise, so I'm hoping further on in the story that she could restrain herself a bit. And Learn to better herself for family and herself. Another interesting thing that's making me excited is the love drama that's going to happen soon. In overall, the story is just starting to get to the plot. It's a bit clique, but hey, clique or not, this story is interesting!

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Thorns of the Forgotten Rose

Panqiuyan

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Thank you i will keep that in mind