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Review Detail of ConstiP in Unbeatable! Invincible! Unparalleled!

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ConstiP
ConstiPLv55yrConstiP

Really good book, got me hooked. Sadly, there are so many mistakes in this text, sometimes I have to read a sentence multiple times just to understand the meaning... Please get yourself an editor! I do like your style however.

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Unbeatable! Invincible! Unparalleled!

_Ram_

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ConstiP
ConstiPLv5ConstiP

Also, please stop switching between past and present tense!!

ConstiP
ConstiPLv5ConstiP

Nevermind, just found out that you only upload the good chapters to patreon and leave the erroneous ones here.......

_Ram_
_Ram_Author_Ram_

Hey! Glad you found out about my novel! I had to admit during the fist tens or so chapters, my writing was quite bad and I constantly changed the tenses. But currently, i think im improving myself as I wrote more! An editor right now is too expensive for me.. 1k words for $5.. I dont even have $20 in my wallet xD Anyway, thanks for your reviews! Hope you continue to read my novel!

Omnipotent_reader
Omnipotent_readerLv1Omnipotent_reader

Very well

_Ram_:Hey! Glad you found out about my novel! I had to admit during the fist tens or so chapters, my writing was quite bad and I constantly changed the tenses. But currently, i think im improving myself as I wrote more! An editor right now is too expensive for me.. 1k words for $5.. I dont even have $20 in my wallet xD Anyway, thanks for your reviews! Hope you continue to read my novel!