Review Detail of yuujinchou in End of Heaven's Path

Hello, this is 'Yuujinchou'. This story is created by a novice writer - after a few years of hiatus, therefore, the story is/might be stiff and uncomfortable to read. This is a slow paced story that focuses on character development and full world development. >▪︎< Update comes and goes. Additionally, every tens of chapter (10, 20,...), there would revisions and editing that would transpire to the prior chapters. Please do enjoy and leave a constructive criticism. Thank you. ♡