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Aydendaanial0910
Aydendaanial0910Lv26yr
2018-10-31 04:13

Like it. You are one of two original writers i think have potential. I will support both of you. Too many fan fictions out there who in my opinion just steal other peoples stories and start a side story with it. I plan to find one more original story writer to support. Now 2 selected, one more to go. Both un rated so far so u have my support. I will ask the other author to also read yr book. Both of u are neck to neck on chapters. The other original story i follow is called the devil's weapon maker. You 2 shd support each other and feed and grow off each other in my opinion. Allow me to be the link.

The Three Heavenly Cultivations: Body, Mind & Soul

TheOmnipotentOtaku
4.6
47 Chs

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TheOmnipotentOtaku
TheOmnipotentOtakuAuthor

Arigato Gosaimas! I will take up the opportunity you have provided, and I shall also read The Devil's Weapon Maker. By the way, I feel the same about fan-fictions. They are easy to write, but they don't have an original background and setting, making them in a position of reaping no profits out of their stories.

6yr
TheOmnipotentOtaku
TheOmnipotentOtakuAuthor

BTW, today's my birthday, so please vote me Power Stones as a gift! ;-)

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WorstNameEver
WorstNameEverLv5

whats the other original author you think is good? I know two on this site that is really good atm but one of them is on hiatus and the other is doing 3 books at the same time the damn monster.,

6yr
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Mav12
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Reveal spoiler

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Spixxy
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I read it. Will be a follower for sure. Looking forward to more to be honest. Thanks for also rating my book. I guess we both have to thank Ayden.🤣 Also a quick question. How do u make a cover page?

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Rashmi01
Rashmi01Lv6

I have been following this story from the beginning and the best thing I like about it is its originality. The characters are a bit weird to begin with but it seems they will grow and mature with the story. The story is going well till now and I can't wait to see the changes in MC and others. Overall I would say uts z very good work. I'll suggest more careful editing, though. Thanks for your hard work, author.

6yr
TheOmnipotentOtaku
TheOmnipotentOtakuAuthor

Well, this is for all the readers out there. I haven't got any comments on the recent chapters, so I request all of you to comment on what you don't like, or what is bad. That way, I can improve the story. Please review as well, which will point out my mistakes. As of now, I have 37k views, and out of those 37k people, just about less than 10 are giving comments and reviews.

6yr
NewNEET
NewNEETLv5

Really need a lot of spacing dude.. Just full of words on my phones screen.. And thats annoying.. Hopefully u can edit that......................................................

6yr
TheOmnipotentOtaku
TheOmnipotentOtakuAuthor

Hey guys... PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write reviews, 0 stars will also do, but, PLEASE write! I still haven't been given a star rating because of insufficient reviews! PLEASE!

6yr
TheOmnipotentOtaku
TheOmnipotentOtakuAuthor

This is my first work. Please support it and write good reviews. I promise it will exceed your expectations (I guess so). The story will surely get interesting. Please read, vote and give good reviews!

6yr
Rashmi01
Rashmi01Lv6

The main character looks interesting. The story seems to be developing nicely at the right pace. Looking forward to twists and turns full of humour. Way to go!

6yr
Rashmi01
Rashmi01Lv6

Great! This is the first chapter and it started with a fine amount of comedy! I believe that this will become very interesting in the future!

6yr
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