Review Detail of DotaRoyalty in Reincarnation in Highschool DxD (Rewrite)

Although yes it is bad and trash, not to offend you in any way. I would like to see the contination of this novel, with a some more though out things, I know the hardship of even trying to write a story and I commend you to write a story.| And mate, hope your english gets better in the future, grammar and such things that are put into english can make a whole world of a difference for novels. (btw, i'm a novice when it comes to giving reviews and things like that so sorry if a sound stupid.)