Review Detail of lichennight286 in Reincarnation in Highschool DxD (Rewrite)

the whole story so far it seems to pointless.... i guess your whole story will be interacting with himself or his power which is fine in like max 4 chapters but you doubled it and you were filling the story punctuation marks to make the chapter longer then it is..... Overall your story sucks so far if you keep writing you should fix that