Review Detail of BurningDesire in System: Gods' Gardener
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Thank you guys for Review! But I have announcement! The way I describe my characters and building is lacking! Gumen! So, once I'm done with volume 1, I hope you overlook them >.< I'll do my best to describe things better on later chapters! I'm not angry cause I use so much exclamation point, but cause I'm excited that you guys pointed out my mistakes^~^ which I will improve for the best!!!!!
System: Gods' Gardener
BurningDesire
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I don't like to hurt your feelings, I am also thankful for your suggestion but, I'm not earning anything and I can't pay for your service>.<
averagereaderman:I can edit chapters for you. It seems like you’re only messing up with little things like “He starts” When it should be “He started”
averagereaderman:I can edit chapters for you. It seems like you’re only messing up with little things like “He starts” When it should be “He started”
I need to ask, is there any romance. if there is on what stage are they in did they kiss already or even have s*x. Please answer btw is this harem story...
BurningDesire:hey! You're an author. I've seen you once in our discord group
I'm so sorry to disspoint you, but, I know nothing about things like s*x so I can't put it in the story. I might just mess up. Also, it's not a full harem story, there are some fillers, but the romance will only develop in the second volume. That's Chapter 50-70, I think
DarkKnight32:I need to ask, is there any romance. if there is on what stage are they in did they kiss already or even have s*x. Please answer btw is this harem story...
I can also help out if you need it. No money, I just have a lot of time on my hands. I'll see if I can get Discord again.
BurningDesire:Smoked Dragon Meat #7044
BurningDesire:I don't like to hurt your feelings, I am also thankful for your suggestion but, I'm not earning anything and I can't pay for your service>.<
