Review Detail of LordTurtle in System: Gods' Gardener
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Sorry for the low rating but I couldn't give this novel more. "One day, you’re 17 and you’re planning for someday. And then quietly, without you ever really noticing, someday is today. And then someday is yesterday. And this is your life." - John Green.
System: Gods' Gardener
BurningDesire
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I actually read 15 - 18 chapters but the status is showing just 1 chapter. Your novel has great potential but the interactions between characters should be fleshed out more. The MC should be fleshed out more. Your 1st chapter is a bit disjointed as previously mentioned by another reviewer and proper explanation & description of interactions & the world is needed. I will definitely come back to read your novel again after you get better & re-edit the chapters (I'm guessing English isn't your 1st language or is it?) and write another review with 5 star rating. Heck I would thrown in a couple more 4 star ratings too. Thank you for writing and there are people that like/enjoy your novel very much and are entertained by it. Keep writing and who knows you might become a professional writer that writes best sellers in the future! 👍🏼😊
BurningDesire:,Atleast read until the end T^T Buhuhu! Well, thank you for review! I hope I can change your mind once Ire-edit the way I describe my chars xD
LordTurtle:I actually read 15 - 18 chapters but the status is showing just 1 chapter. Your novel has great potential but the interactions between characters should be fleshed out more. The MC should be fleshed out more. Your 1st chapter is a bit disjointed as previously mentioned by another reviewer and proper explanation & description of interactions & the world is needed. I will definitely come back to read your novel again after you get better & re-edit the chapters (I'm guessing English isn't your 1st language or is it?) and write another review with 5 star rating. Heck I would thrown in a couple more 4 star ratings too. Thank you for writing and there are people that like/enjoy your novel very much and are entertained by it. Keep writing and who knows you might become a professional writer that writes best sellers in the future! 👍🏼😊
Yep! It's not my first language. I don't even graduated xD Thanks for your review^~^, Like I said before, I'll do my best to change your review^~^
LordTurtle:*throw in
All the best for your novel and most importantly your bright future. I hope you'll become a famous writer and I can say that I gave a 1star review to that writer but later changed it! 😁😜
BurningDesire:Yep! It's not my first language. I don't even graduated xD Thanks for your review^~^, Like I said before, I'll do my best to change your review^~^