Other than the grammar which has some serious issues theres also the extreme lack of details about damn near everything So i really cant give it a higher score than this unless I'm willing to just overlook these mistakes (which i wont). If these issues get better down the line id be more than willing to Edit my rating/review.
BurningDesire
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LIKEBurningDesire:Thank you. I've been reminded by that too. So I just need time to re-edit them. Well, I'm not really good using english language, butI'll try my best to improve and let you change your review^~^
Haha, worry not^^, having this kind of reviews make an author know their mistakes and learn from it^^
sacredyeti:Don't worry author it's fine don't listen to these haters I love ur boom even with the errors