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Review Detail of Elude in Lightning immortal

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Elude
EludeLv105yrElude

I don't even know how to find good original novels anymore (the rating score is always misleading), it's like climbing an arduous journey through extremely trash grammar 50% of the time. Normally I'd do an in-depth review on why I don't like a certain novel, but this novel is pretty self-explanatory. Writing Quality: 1.5/5 (My eyes are bleeding) Stability Of Updates: 5/5 (I'll give you this) Story Development: 2/5 (MC has a very steep learning curve) Character Design: 2/5 (Look one line above) World Background: 3/5 (Well, there's a world and it's not too bad, I can faintly picture an image.) If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)

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Lightning immortal

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blue_cloud
blue_cloudAuthorblue_cloud

Thank you for your review , i truly nedded some criticism. Thanks to you i know where to start from . I hope you have a good day

WorstNameEver
WorstNameEverLv5WorstNameEver

@BookCurator Can you do my book a review? It only has 3 chapters at the moment though and I just want a review of things like writing style and grammar and such. English is my main language and I am quite good with it so there should be next to no mistakes :)

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blue_cloudAuthorblue_cloud

Hello I tried to correct the grammar mistakes in the first few chapters, I will be grateful if you see it and give me some feedback.

WorstNameEver
WorstNameEverLv5WorstNameEver

Ok. Thanks for the advice

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Lazareth
LazarethLv4Lazareth

Would appreciate it if you review my book.