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2023-12-21 19:43

It's ok story so far. the first few chapters could of been writing better. too short for my liking .not long enough to set the mood of story. privilege mc out for revenge ?? I give this story another chance and give another review when I in the mood to read more of the chapters.

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Honest_critic1980
Honest_critic1980Lv12

I forgot to mention I did like how well the description of background was done and also of other characters

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Thanks for the feedback! Don't worry I'll keep this in mind and will write big chapters too

Honest_critic1980:I forgot to mention I did like how well the description of background was done and also of other characters
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