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KimchixPanda
KimchixPandaLv45yrKimchixPanda

I like the beginning of the story so far. As the author updates I will change my score. I like how the character is slowly gaining his strength instead of walking into the world like jesus-kun. The writing is pretty decent and the flow is smooth. Information isn't dumped on the pages which is a god send. Also I have a feeling like Loki might be the culprit to the malfunctioning circle. The character seems kind of 2d as all I know is he got dumped and committed suicide and that's how he ended up in this world. The plot armor glossed over his ability to easily kill a human which is ok as it was described as a game world (something like gamer mind). I would like to see the author return to the breakup and make it more traumatizing and even have the character develop a distrust to females (other than the goddess). The foreshadowing is good but slow it down.

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I Was Summoned as a Demon

WoolfWrites

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WoolfWrites
WoolfWritesAuthorWoolfWrites

Thanks for the review, and yes you have a slight idea on how the MC thinks about girls but remember this does have the romance tag šŸ˜Š

Little_Dino
Little_DinoLv5Little_Dino

may I ask if this is a harem?

WoolfWrites:Thanks for the review, and yes you have a slight idea on how the MC thinks about girls but remember this does have the romance tag šŸ˜Š
WoolfWrites
WoolfWritesAuthorWoolfWrites

That is currently undecided for me but no need to worry because love won't be in the MC's mind for awhile.

Little_Dino:may I ask if this is a harem?
Little_Dino
Little_DinoLv5Little_Dino

Thank you for the reply. If you are casting a vote, may I vote no harem?

WoolfWrites:That is currently undecided for me but no need to worry because love won't be in the MC's mind for awhile.
Little_Dino
Little_DinoLv5Little_Dino

Of course this is your novel though, so you get the say

Little_Dino:Thank you for the reply. If you are casting a vote, may I vote no harem?
Dorof
DorofLv5Dorof

Wait... A romance tag? Well i bive in you. Dont make this an assasination system2.0 with the romancešŸ˜€ I like romance but not when 20chapter is dedicated to it in a row fully. I love your novel btw

WoolfWrites:Thanks for the review, and yes you have a slight idea on how the MC thinks about girls but remember this does have the romance tag šŸ˜Š
WoolfWrites
WoolfWritesAuthorWoolfWrites

Yeah my mind is also voting for a non harem. Because that will need more character development for the girls and I have to manage it so that all harem members are talking sometimes.

Little_Dino:Thank you for the reply. If you are casting a vote, may I vote no harem?
WoolfWrites
WoolfWritesAuthorWoolfWrites

Thanks for the support, romance won't arrive very fast like other novels do. I hate those kinds where just saving a girl makes her fall in love with the MC. You can expect that romance come with a good development.

Dorof:Wait... A romance tag? Well i bive in you. Dont make this an assasination system2.0 with the romancešŸ˜€ I like romance but not when 20chapter is dedicated to it in a row fully. I love your novel btw