Be My Strength Book Review By LuoYeYouLing - WebNovel

LuoYeYouLingAuthor6yr

2018-10-26 08:39

Shamelessly giving myself 5* here. Please review and/or vote with your spirit stones if you like the story. Hello people! This is Luo Ye, the author of Be My Strength. I am doing my best to post at least 8-10 chapters a week. Due to my weakness in grammar, I am currently working with a friend who is helping me with the proofreading. However, since none of us are professionals, we might miss out something during the proofreading / editing process. Please don't hesitate to let us know if you found any mistakes. Yours, Luo Ye

Be My Strength

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YeakLv6

Mind telling how many chapters are you planning?

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LuoYeYouLingAuthor

Hi Yeak. My initial plan is to write between 100,000 to 200,000. I think it might end around 250-300 chapters. Of course, this is just an estimate. :)

Yeak:Mind telling how many chapters are you planning?

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MissJebaLv11

i love your stories.keep writing. i totally understand.

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jmbrianafenisLv13

Just accidentally open your novel with the details i reviewed captivate my attention to contenue read this novel ....nice story author

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jmbrianafenisLv13

Just accidentally open your novel with the details i reviewed captivate my attention to contenue read this novel ....nice story author

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jmbrianafenisLv13

Just accidentally open your novel with the details i reviewed captivate my attention to contenue read this novel ....nice story author

6yr

jmbrianafenisLv13

Just accidentally open your novel with the details i reviewed captivate my attention to contenue read this novel ....nice story author

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jmbrianafenisLv13

Just accidentally open your novel with the details i reviewed captivate my attention to contenue read this novel ....nice story author

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jmbrianafenisLv13

Just accidentally open your novel with the details i reviewed captivate my attention to contenue read this novel ....nice story author

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friend_1Lv14

This novel is worth reading. Thanks for writing this novel.

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friend_1Lv14

This novel is worth reading. Thanks for writing this novel.

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friend_1Lv14

This novel is worth reading. Thanks for writing this novel.

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Nana_alceliniaLv10

Kara and DX have a great chemistry!

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Skully_Lv13

only weak authors review their own novel!

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LuoYeYouLingAuthor

Bah! Only the strongest and most resilient authors know benefit of giving shameless reviews to one self

Skully_:only weak authors review their own novel!

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Mine11Lv5

Wow... The story is interesting. It is already reached around 300. Is it going to end soon??

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Mine11Lv5

Wow... The story is interesting. It is already reached around 300. Is it going to end soon??

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LuoYeYouLingAuthor

Hmm, might end around 400? I can't give exact numbers. I'm trying to finish up asap.

Mine11:Wow... The story is interesting. It is already reached around 300. Is it going to end soon??

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Veronica8Lv5

Um, is this a boys love? I ask because it has been tagged BL and showing up in such tag lists. All good if it is. If not, you might want to consider the tag for target audience reasons.

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LuoYeYouLingAuthor

Hi, there's a BL side couple...That's why it was tagged with it. :)

Veronica8:Um, is this a boys love? I ask because it has been tagged BL and showing up in such tag lists. All good if it is. If not, you might want to consider the tag for target audience reasons.

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Matesai3point0Lv12

Just created 3 accounts just to fuckingly support this freaking awesome novel So guys!! please do add this to your library Highly recommended 👍😊👌 Very interesting story, guaranted you will like it

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HansuaLv6

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HyowhaLv5

I usually don’t read romance novels, but this actually hooked me in. The grammar is good, and there’s are no glaring mistakes that I have found while reading. When it comes to the style, then I’d say the paragraphs are a bit chunky. You should try making them smaller so the readers are not overwhelmed by walls of text. I don’t mind slow paced stories, but there’s should be an event that I look forward to, maybe some kind of foreshadowing. (If I had rom give an example - Cultivation chat group is very slow paced, and it starts with nothing happening to the mc, but I keep reading it because I want to find out how he joins the chat.) The story and the character story are very good. I find myself caught into the world after reading only chapter one. The characters have personalities and a background, which makes them 3d. Overall, this story is one worth to look at, if they’d are interested in romance and the like. It’s honestly really interesting, if one makes it past those small mistakes,

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cloudy99Lv15

Stumble onto a gem while looking for a new novel to read. A strong female lead instead of the usual weak type. Will look forward to reading this novel.

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VasteneradaLv12

Dear author I usually give 5 * to all original novels, it's hard for you authors to write and work at the same time, one must be really into writing to do so, but with your novel it's a shame I can't give you more ... 6* or 7*. I love it so much. I'm not fond of romance novels and usually use this platform to improve my English so I pick up novles randomly, yours was one of this random picks. Lucky me 😊😊😊😊. The plot is well developed, the main characters are complicated of course, like people use to be in real life. The pace is not very fast and better not, because the story needs time to develope, there is so much background... what I like the most is that from the beginning the relationship between the main characters is there, but you give us clues about their past, how they met and how they work out their relationship, on plus the female character is strong and seeks revenge.... what more can I ask FOR???? Anyways, don't mind your grammar, you have some problems but not big ones. Just one wish.... don't make the story too long. Great job. I have already recommended this nove to my friends.

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Kirti181Lv4

I started reading this novel after viewing some interesting reviews about the story.But when i start reading it I m totally disappointed that I thought I had wasted my time reading it.To be honest I didn't like the initial chapters and thought about stop reading it,I don't know why but I kept reading it.And now I m glad that I continued to read,it's just toooo good with a lot of suspense,revenge,brotherhood, children's fight and fun,friendship,power of love,money,mind and status.I m that addicted to reading it that I completed reading it within just two days ,cause I can't stop myself from knowing what's next to come.....

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helluva_girlLv5

All I can say is it's worth it. Worth your time, worth your spirit stones, worth your power stones. It's the best novel I have come across so far and I have read quite a few good ones. The author is really invested in making the story as realistic as possible. It makes you realise that everything we think we need or want may not be as ideal as we imagine it to be. There are a few grammatical errors, which is a pet peeve of mine, but the story is too good to leave just because of those few grammatical errors.

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ImBlooLv5

Your writing seems very polished. Typos and grammar errors are rare. The sentences flow nicely. The contents leave something to be desired, though. The synopsis implies some sort of conflict, but as of chap 8 it's still not clear to me. Who's IX trying to take revenge on?

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Gu001Lv4

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