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Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv66yr
2019-01-01 15:51

Decent wish fulfillment fanfiction. If I had a dollar per fanfiction like this that was made by single, virgin males I would be richer than bill gates. But on the positive the grammar is decent, plot aint the worst and the character isnt total trash. So thats something. Read if your bored. Could skmeone please report the endless spa. Reviews that keep appaering? Thank you.

DxD System In DxD

Seion
4.0
248 Chs

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Jian_Chen008
Jian_Chen008Lv4

Don't dis such a legendary author

6yr
1
AwronZizao
AwronZizaoLv10

What's wrong with a wish-fulfillment fan-fiction? Seriously? Every story is someones wishes made manifest. If you don't like it sure, however I don't think it being wish-fulfillment is a valid reason to complain about a story. If you disagree move on, it's not constructive criticism, it's just you being unable to leave and find another story you like to read instead. Making yourself look cheap.

6yr
17
Strickland_Propane
Strickland_PropaneLv14

I don’t know about anyone else but isn’t this dude like sneak praising this novel? 🤣 What was that word mofos kept using? Oh, right! Tsundere! this dude likes the story, he’s just too ashamed to admit it.🤣

5yr
21
Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv6

Not at all. It just isnt as bad as some others but nowhere near readable. The barrier to readability drops on this website. Apparently having moderately readable stories is optional. Go figure.

Strickland_Propane:I don’t know about anyone else but isn’t this dude like sneak praising this novel? 🤣 What was that word mofos kept using? Oh, right! Tsundere! this dude likes the story, he’s just too ashamed to admit it.🤣
5yr
6
Strickland_Propane
Strickland_PropaneLv14

I haven’t read it and was debating if I should give it quick run through, while checking other users reviews when I saw yours standing out. Couldn’t help myself and replied to your comment with one of my own. Lol

Sage_HiddenBear:Not at all. It just isnt as bad as some others but nowhere near readable. The barrier to readability drops on this website. Apparently having moderately readable stories is optional. Go figure.
5yr
1
LAW
LAWLv12

Its funny how you call every author who makes erotic fanifcs that are not up to your standards ‘Virgin male’, when you know that you are a 25 year old obese fatty still living in his parents house. Get a life losers! because i’ve seen you comment the same thing on every R18 Novel.

5yr
14
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

I think he is just jealous of other ,real people having relationship so he takes it out on a fanfic

4yr
1
Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

its probably due to the near unreadability of most fsn fict

LAW:Its funny how you call every author who makes erotic fanifcs that are not up to your standards ‘Virgin male’, when you know that you are a 25 year old obese fatty still living in his parents house. Get a life losers! because i’ve seen you comment the same thing on every R18 Novel.
3yr
3
Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

Its because the intimate interractions within the majority of WN’s novels are extremely unrealistic for anyone who has actually had experience themselves

LAW:Its funny how you call every author who makes erotic fanifcs that are not up to your standards ‘Virgin male’, when you know that you are a 25 year old obese fatty still living in his parents house. Get a life losers! because i’ve seen you comment the same thing on every R18 Novel.
3yr
4
Hydranoid88
Hydranoid88Lv4

like u

AwronZizao:What's wrong with a wish-fulfillment fan-fiction? Seriously? Every story is someones wishes made manifest. If you don't like it sure, however I don't think it being wish-fulfillment is a valid reason to complain about a story. If you disagree move on, it's not constructive criticism, it's just you being unable to leave and find another story you like to read instead. Making yourself look cheap.
5mth
1
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Li_Cangtian
Li_CangtianLv6

Utter trash. Mc gets reincarnated and sent to DxD. Within the first few chapters, he r*a*p*e*s The fallen angel that originally kills the MC from the series. On top of that, She is now bound to be his personal *** slave. His sacred gear is jus tr the ability to bind 16 women (demons, angels, gods, dragons, humans, etc) in the exact same way. I will repeat, Utter Trash.

6yr

MiniLicht
MiniLichtLv13

Yooo, i'm s i m p l e and just fan of SEION. and its enough for 5* hahahahahahaha argggghhhhh for Sona-Kaichou sake 140chapters argggghhhhh for Rias-Buchou sake 140chapters argggghhhhh for Akeno-Fukubuchou sake 140chapters

6yr
FinzRaizer
FinzRaizerLv11

DxD + Harem + Echi + Daily Update with enough word................ enough for 5 star..........................................................................................

6yr
Tom_Bombadil
Tom_BombadilLv13

Quality over quantity. Seion can produce alot of chapter which is good,but the story is very terrible and is one of seion worst stories.......................................................................

6yr
Immadropitall
ImmadropitallLv2

Even if if does no happen often, the psychotic author should put R*PE Tag in here. I really do not know what is going on in the author's head. Just like in every other FanFic he has made, it seems that the author has made some rather wierd choices and might even be some sort of child with mental disorder.

3yr
ArgosYesu
ArgosYesuLv15

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Dementedpikachu673
Dementedpikachu673Lv1

Mc is ****ed up, the first thing he does when he reincarnates is rape someone, this author is ****ed up, and I'm worried for the people that think this is ok.

4yr
Hocolate
HocolateLv4

🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔porn lol 😒 boring story line🤢🤮🤧😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵

5yr
TiananmenSquare198
TiananmenSquare198Lv5

Just watch some hentai like this is just **** with a """"""""""""story""""""""""" even **** actors are more entertaining to watch for the story Btw isn't 140 characters kinda dumb like I already made my point let me leave WN

5yr
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