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Review Detail of HEHAASS in Death with benefits

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HEHAASS
HEHAASSLv45yrHEHAASS

Annoying characters. The mc's brain is supposed to be intelligent but acts like a dumb 10 yr old retard who has never seen money. The premise of the story is great but the mc ruins it for me. The fake boyfriend, father in law and more other sh,it. I bet he is going to marry the fake so called gf and seems like the author couldn't find any other way to integrate the mc into the supernatural society without using the most annoying plot. The mc kills the thugs for killing him but let's the so called fake father in law go and gets bitten by his fake fiance. I especially hate the mc's who try to act cool and **** when they end up always being the hero and are manipulated very easily.

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Death with benefits

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PyCode
PyCodeLv5PyCode

But uhhh.... doesn't being her boyfriend allow him to have *** with ridiculously hot girls?

anger
angerLv11anger

It’s annoying how horny you are

PyCode:But uhhh.... doesn't being her boyfriend allow him to have *** with ridiculously hot girls?
PyCode
PyCodeLv5PyCode

I know, it annoys me to no end. But you know, I'm just commenting from the mc's perspective, even though I'm not even reading this anymore.

anger:It’s annoying how horny you are
Critical_Kind
Critical_KindLv4Critical_Kind

Could you do a review on my book, Draga of the Vanguard?. I could use the criticism

Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

Yeah yeah what do you expect from a person having no money at all and just got insane powers? Go for world domination with his puny powers!I applaud you for your insane power of bull****ting

HEHAASS
HEHAASSLv4HEHAASS

Your reply is very retarded. I am not going to respond to that.

Lord_Meph1sto:Yeah yeah what do you expect from a person having no money at all and just got insane powers? Go for world domination with his puny powers!I applaud you for your insane power of bull****ting
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

Yh yh whatever

HEHAASS:Your reply is very retarded. I am not going to respond to that.