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Selitos1I
Selitos1ILv56yr
2018-10-26 23:59

It's a fun premise, the story so far has some potential, it is also good for a laugh, but it desperately needs an editor. .. ..

Death with benefits

DreamingSAGE
4.1
62 Chs

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HEHAASS
HEHAASSLv4

Annoying characters. The mc's brain is supposed to be intelligent but acts like a dumb 10 yr old retard who has never seen money. The premise of the story is great but the mc ruins it for me. The fake boyfriend, father in law and more other sh,it. I bet he is going to marry the fake so called gf and seems like the author couldn't find any other way to integrate the mc into the supernatural society without using the most annoying plot. The mc kills the thugs for killing him but let's the so called fake father in law go and gets bitten by his fake fiance. I especially hate the mc's who try to act cool and **** when they end up always being the hero and are manipulated very easily.

6yr

DreamingSAGE
DreamingSAGEAuthor

Being the author and a senior cultivator of shameless, i SHOULD give my own novel a 5 stars rating. I think this should be my fourth with, The Enlightened, Dark Devourer and No limit. I hope you like it.

6yr
lupen
lupenLv5

Its rather rare to find a straight forward novel like this where you don't cringe every other chapter because of some unrealistic or stupid plot development.

6yr
zfgredrfgerg
zfgredrfgergLv2

Excellent story. The story contains drama, comedy and action. Need to read it, people. __________________________________________________________

6yr
Zantix
ZantixLv5

By now is great , more than great is awesome,the ability is something new and refreshing, the use of supernatural characters in the modern is just great I only wish that there are more and more chapters I hope a lot of this, my energy stones will be destined to this novel at least until I reach the top 20

6yr
JPS123
JPS123Lv5

Beautiful and I want MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE

6yr
Vighnesh_93
Vighnesh_93Lv10

This is the only novel where you want the MC to die but you will not hate him. A good concept, MC is a OP, and this novel might end short. Sometimes it feels like slice of life; for people who like slice of life genre will probably like this story.....And don't care about those 1star reviews.....Definitely Worth a try!!

6yr
SilverEmpyrean
SilverEmpyreanLv15

Give it a try and have an open mind! you will enjoy this novel to the fullest :D and still no character count fuu ive been asking this for ages now!

6yr
Ujiak
UjiakLv6

Reveal spoiler

6yr
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