Review Detail of Chryiss in God's Authority

Unlike most other world stories, you took the unique path of making Rael enter in a hellish world as the lowest “class.” Another point of difference are the seeds. So overall, this world stands out among stories of “systems” or typical magic. There’s a few minor typos that can easily fixed, like capitalization or a missing space. Altho, where did you pick up putting spaces between the quote ends and beginnings? It’s my first time seeing that. This was written well overall; however, I would’ve liked to know more about his first experiences in the new world. It was mentioned that it was a hell world, but I was confused whether he was transferred or restarted. I even reread the beginning after chapter 12. Does the small hands mean he’s a child now? Has he just started living or has he been there a while? He seems rather familiar with the world right away. Ahh maybe I’m getting this all wrong, but since a lot of the events so were occurring to 171, the girl, I didn’t figure this out. Otherwise keep it up! The action moves quickly, but it has good detail. I’d say this is your biggest strength.