Review Detail of lets_get_this_rice in God's Authority

Great work! The story is developing very nicely, but there are too few chapters out for me to properly get the direction of where it is going. Grammar is as written 'GOLD' and it really he** freshen up the characters and world building. Also, there are other aspects that are rather..'more detailed' than one would expect, but I for one, don't mind. Keep up the good work! This will definitely get big. 5/5 for me