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nobodys_angelAuthor6yr
2018-10-21 00:32

Friend please give review so that I can improve my style of writing ,so that you can enjoy please.. This is my first time of writing I know there are mistake but your review makes me to learn more

Lost in the world and found by you

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Getting interesting I am waiting for more updates is she lost every one .There is a good support according to the story she is bless d to have her uncle aunt I think and also her cousin

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