Review Detail of Wakanda42 in Op System

So I actually really like how you built up this story plot wise. Compared to a lot of fanfics this one is one of the better ones. Now first it’s being limited by the quality of writing. Although it’s not bad enough to stop it from standing out from other fanfics it does hinder this story from being great. Second your doing the same stuff that people hated from the original story where your time skipping almost everything that happens in aincrad but I guess this may be because your not trying to do a full 300+ chapter but still this is hindering your story. Third your character depth and development is incredibly shallow and of this wasn’t a fanfic this would be incredibly hard to read. Finally this is more of a tip than a flaw but I would like to see you add your own story in this fanfic and not make a carbon copy of the Original work. SAO especially the aincrad ark has so many gaps that you can fill without messing up the story. This fanfic lacks imagination which I believe is one of the most important qualities and author should have (even the system is kind of bland). Also although it doesn’t retract from the story the stats and leveling makes no sense whatsoever and I recommend cleaning that up a little bit. You also took away all the sword skills that normal sao players get and never explained why (horizontal, horizontal arc, horizontal square, etc) now that I think of it the MC also doesn’t have any actual sword skills whatsoever. Anyway like I said earlier this fanfic has potential and if you fix it up a little bit I could see it becoming one of the best OC fanfics (anime wise).